Go..........................
Jump off
a cliff
and fall
down a
waterfall
into a
pool of
piranha's
get half eaten
by them
then wash up
on the shore
and
then
I
will
come
and
BLOW TORCH
your
bones.
Author notes
I say this to people i hate!
#1 in the DIE SERIES( i made up to say to my friends(inkdeath) borther)
In a list
A contest entry
- Make Me Laugh by redradical.
1500 points, ended April 14, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow seasongs once again thats demented!
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Haha, I have to say, this is what I was looking for. Probably the funniest thing I've read in a long time. Maybe not the most artist merit, but that's not what I wanted. Great write, and thanks for posting.
-Ryan
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That might just do the job and it certainly lets them know how you feel.
jjj
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Yikes! Do you lay awake nights thinking up ways to do people in? This is another good one. I see you have a series of "Die" poetry. I think you'll grow up to be a horror story writer....REMEMBER....only write about it
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feelin it
hate is such a pretty word
2 forgive is just devine
but who really wants 2 go to heaven
wen its killin on ya mind
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i have another poem.........
simalar in my "series"
heres the link
http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3951649
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