Those eyes
they're your eyes
No supprise
crying lies
Telling me
hopefully
we will rise
Above the truth thats seeking through
For you
Those eyes for you
Those eyes
Telling me
I should sleep
when its light
Telling me
I shouldn't be
Compramised
Above the truth thats seeking through
for you
you know what is real or truth
It's seeking through
to you and you
Those eyes belong to you
Those eyes
Hopefully
will not be
when I wake up
Telling me
I should be
Some one made up
Seeing me,
feeling me,
Wake up
Above the truth thats seeking through
Those eyes
It's no surprise
belong to you.
Author notes
Option: Three.
Choice: Eyes.
A contest entry
- Because we're not sick of options yet. by Viva La Vie Boheme.
600 points, ended March 25, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is really good... it has a great beat to it!
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Sf
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it ^_^
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I like it, bry! but can I be honest? I had the image of you rapping it in my head XD youd be the best female white rapper in the world
Ok...this got disturbing fast XD
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Morgan Kennedy Nite
LOL XD I don't imagine this one being hip-hop at all, I'm interested how you get that!
Maybe it wouldn't be so bad that way XD 
And I AM the best female white rapper in the world
MY BOOBS AH FROM T' GHETTO!
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Nice! I like this. There's truth in it, and honesty is a rarity in these days. Thank you for entering! I like the use of "seeking" to describe the truth, very effective.
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