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The Choice I never had

We lay in our bed,
Death hovering above you're head
Loving couple we are
Mortal and Immortal
Loving underneath the stars.
We hate to lose you so young
So as a child of the night,
I'll give u the choice I never had,
Take it, I'm begging you please,
You're blood will be so sweet
As you slowly caress my body,
Yours will slowly die
And you will become like me,
And become lost in the negativity.

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  • g-tonttu
    February 24, 2008

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    Dark,
    not usually a great fan of this dark poems but this one caught my eye.
    It ha that "something" which creates tingles on my spine. The tone is powerful and takes me to remember a lot of different Gothic rock songs.

    Keep up the good work,
    G