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“What I want for Christmas”

• What I want for Christmas this year
Is not something queer
Though it won’t under the Christmas tree
Nor could be wrapped so one can see

• What I want for Christmas
Is way far from a toy?
That would bring a little joy
Don’t bring cards for this boy

• What I want for Christmas
Is not something expensive
Nothing I ask in extensive
Though it’s even pensive

• What I want for Christmas
Is far more than a sparkling ring
What I want is not a big thing
It just won’t fit in your bag to bring

• What I want for Christmas
Is not a teddy bear
I bet you can’t find it anywhere
But Santa I only know where

• What I want for Christmas
Is as simple as this
That would bring me much bliss
It would be happy as a kiss

• There mommy lives a block away
I want you call her that day
On Christmas bring my mommy together
So with daddy we can have dinner altogether

Author notes

Christmas Eve by *LostinaJungle http://lostinajungle.deviantart.com/art/Christmas-Eve-71689366

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  • RainbowGirl257
    February 24, 2008
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    hmmm, i love all the rhyming you have used, you great at it. good luck in the contest