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words

choking on yesteryear's clutches
intending to hurt,
confuse, push away

(I was cheap show)

wish I had said those words...

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option 1~ unsaid words

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  • sunflowerpoet
    February 23, 2008

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    Excellent, deep write. It is a beauty to see the story unfold in so few words, I can relate. Thanks for entering..
    Hugz,
    Sunflower.