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Crush

It’s a lurch in my stomach
An abdominal blow
My heart rate has quickened
But my brain’s running slow
I’m feeling light-headed
I can’t concentrate
Confusion consumes me
It’s such a strange state
I’m giddy and anxious
My face starts to flush
And after a moment
I know it’s a crush

Author notes

Wrote this for school in the eighth grade. Hope you liked it!

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  • WisdomWarrior
    March 23, 2008

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    "It’s a lurch in my stomach
    An abdominal blow
    My heart rate has quickened
    But my brain’s running slow"

    This is an excellent description. Thanks for visiting my site by the way.

    One Love,

    John


  • sophia moonfairy
    March 23, 2008
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    I like it well done I feel like this about someone lmao ;x but great write :]