a silent wind fills the air
blowing away all my cares
scanning the pitch black sky
looking for a meaning in life
longing for a sign that someday il feel alive
to live through a day without just seeing gray
to smile an actually mean it
but i doubt that will happen
i don't deserve that
iv cause to much pain an frustration
cause my life is so filled with addiction
its ate my heart an flesh whole
an all i feel i have left is roting bone
now I'm drowning in darkness an i feel so alone
i have no one here in life to go to
i guess I'm on my own
Author notes
if you can think of a better title for this tell me
A contest entry
- Fire of your mind by DestiniesTwined.
900 points, ended March 13, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
comment plz dont be harsh
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Thanks for entering my contest. I wish you much luck.
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You're not alone, you got me if you ever wanna talk And one day that smile will come, just gotta wait. (thats the bad part. The wait.)
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a better title..hmmm...what about "alone" sweet and simple
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midnight thoughts isn't a bad title but if you dont like it, something else you could call it is: drowning in darkness
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thank you thats a good title il name it that
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