Gentle rose, your due it glitters,
and shines like diamonds on your skin.
Fragrant bud, dry your falling tears;
forget the rainfall you've been in.
Crimson petals, your color bright,
upon the face a rose on skin.
Blushing flower, your cheeks so flush,
from the sadness you hold within.
Coral blossom, withering thoughts,
your pity browns your blushing skin.
Cerise rose, let your sadness go,
and so true joy will then begin.
Please tell me what you think
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pretty
yay cassieeee
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This is very beautiful, I like the way you express emotion through the changing stages of the rose.
'Fragrant bud, dry your falling tears;
forget the rainfall you've been in' lovely!
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Thanks for pointing thst out. That is not how I wanted to end this poem, I have no clue what I typed there. 'so' was the original word, how it became find is beyond me.
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Oh this was really nice and sweet The last line seems a little mixed up or something though. Overall, I really liked it! Great job Sis.
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