Sunlight on silken hair
Catching you upon the stair
Touching familiar breast
Imagine my unrest
In finding 'twas another there
Author notes
Entry for Prompt #2 - A badly fractured limerick
A contest entry
- Winner Takes All Quickie by sunflowerpoet.
300 points, ended February 24, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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NEVER A NICE FEELING TO FIND BETRAYAL
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A well deserved win my friend,
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Thanks. I am happy and surprised. It was a tad unexpected.
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Congrats on the gold my friend, well done!
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LOL.... This is quite brilliant!! Wonderful take on the prompt, it is so awesome! Thanks for entering..
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Thank you very much. I am glad you liked this. This is my first gold. You have boosted my confidence.
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Good luck in contest. Lol...... very well written indeed. ???? Did he or didn't he? in fact or fiction ?
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It was fictional. HaHa, I am glad you enojoyed it.
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oooooo Chucky good job! Best of luck in the contest.
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I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for commenting.
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