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Cast Away

A flicker of light shines in your eyes

beneath the faded embers of woe

somewhere beneath formidable lies

divine retribution waits in tow

for poetic justice hears your cries

Cast away the things of yesterday

for the road once traveled is no more

scribble new thoughts all along the way

renew faith for great things are in store

right out of stagnation you sashay~

Author notes

words used in order flicker, faded, somewhere, formidable, divine, cast, travleled, scribble, renew, sashay

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    March 15, 2008
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    Good use of words here

    A very well penned piece


  • storiesuntold gold member
    March 9, 2008
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    Good write here

    Very good use of words I enjoyed the read


  • Kelli Marie
    February 26, 2008

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    A word bank sure makes for a challenging write. I think you did an outstanding job. I will have to try one one time. I hope it does well in the contest, for it is a wonderful write.
    Kelli


  • Gypsie Ink
    February 25, 2008
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    Nice

    Let us all heed these words and be better for them! Best of luck in the contest.