I need you with me,
without you i am nothing
I need your comfort
without you i am lost
Please never leave
if you left i would fall
Please never shout
if you shout i shall break
Come and find me
if you lose me i will shatter
Come and hold me
if you let go i will drift away.
Always be happy
if you cry i will liquify
Always be safe
if you are in danger i'll get killed
Plunge me into your heart
use a knife, i'll crack
Plunge me in at the deep end
dive in too shallow i'll hit the ground
Author notes
this is what it makes me think about. 'tis short but i cant think.
A contest entry
- *~Prompt Inspired~* by RainbowGirl257.
500 points, ended March 8, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
yh....
Comments
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i like the short lines and how the lines appear to gradually get longed. i also like your repetition.
thanks for entering and good luck.
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