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turn your head

eyes downcast while voices
continue

mouth set and hardened eyes
decline all invitation

the overpowering blue and
tiny wrinkles lie . .

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prompt: Option #1 unsaid words

20 words

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  • abuyi
    February 25, 2008

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    so few words and you managed to say a lot.. thats talent
    i loved the imagery you sketched.. eyes convey more depth than words
    congrats for your bronze


  • sunflowerpoet
    February 23, 2008

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    Very, very beautiful and powerful. Loved it! Very choosy wording, thanks for entering.
    Hugz,
    Sunflower.