Meaningless Ring

I’m standing,
in this spiral of time
And I’m wondering,
when will all my words
stand up and rhyme

Now I’m lost without a friend
Like it’s all coming to an end
Cause my love is gone
And it’s such a sad song
She was my everything
Now my love
Is just a meaningless ring

I’m a traveller in time,
seems I’m going no place fast
All my words rhyme,
But that won’t help me
to forget about my past

Now I’m lost without a friend
Like it’s all coming to an end
Cause my love is gone
And it’s such a sad song
She was my everything
Now my love
Is just a meaningless ring

You
You where my everything
The passion in my life
Now I can feel the sting
And it makes my head ring

Now I’m lost without a friend
Like it’s all coming to an end
Cause my love is gone
And it’s such a sad song
She was my everything
Now my love
Is just a meaningless ring

A contest entry

*~Prompt Inspired~* by RainbowGirl257. 500 points, ended March 8, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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RainbowGirl257
February 23, 2008

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wow, i love the repetition used and the length of the lines. it's so emotional and meaningful. great job on the prompt! thanks for entering and good luck.
Amarige
February 23, 2008

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What a lovely love song..beautiful lyrics...so sad and very very heartfelt..I hope this is not personal my dear..great job..this should get a trophy
Amarige