Spring is the season of new beginnings,
flowers bloom,
animals are born.
Spring can be the most beautiful time of the year.
There are spring showers,
bringing life back to all those flowers,
cloudy skies make their entrance,
the umbrellas come out,
the rain pounding down on the earth,
bringing a sense of peace.
All the beautiful flowers are reincarnated,
daffodils, tulips, roses.
Blooming,
Kick-starting a world that's bursting into life...
Spring,
turning over a new leaf,
from Winter.
A contest entry
- a spring day ~ a season series by And Hyetal.
650 points, ended March 15, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Write down what you brain says...
Comments
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I love the last three lines of the poem. They wrap up everything well. This whole poem had great imagery and flow.
Nice!
~Cassie
PS: I am very sorry for not judging this contest sooner. I have been busy.
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nice description of a spring season. the rain the thing really describes my city right now!
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The line about umbrellas jumped out at me, but only because where I am, you either have your umbrella handy all winter, or you don't care about getting wet because you never really get THAT wet; only damp, from the heavy misting. (known in other parts of the world as light rain)
Anyway, good job! Hope you win gold!
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