It's here again
that time of year
blow out the candles
now make a wish dear
I wish to face this day
with pride and grace
but the gravity is pulling
all over the place
To go in reverse
just a few years back
a surgery would work
but the money I lack
Diet and exercise is hard
when your bones are brittle
so eat what you like
cause you'll never be little
A contest entry
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Can you feel it?
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Haha, nice write. Funny, funny, piece. (On that note, I think I'll go get an icecream
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Thanks for commenting!
Glad you enjoyed it and I hope you had some icecream for me!!
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What a poem of 'resignation' hahaha never give in or up, I say, find a way, find a way lol thanks for your entry into my contest
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This is a well written piece and the structure remains constant. Personally I think the last two lines are the best because they made me chuckle. Just remember it is far more important to like who you are as person, than to be super skinny.
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Lol
so true...loved how you said this -
Never Say Never - LOL
I lost about 50 pounds over the last 2 years - not skinny yet - but feel so much better about myself - I like your poem - it rhymes and flows great - the content from the heart - I have poems rumbling around in my head when I'm half asleep - keep on keeping on - Hugs - Bless God Joe - (Dobar Dan)
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This pretty much says it all lol I love it.
Linda
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this is a wonderful piece and it sure does rhyme with humour hidden in each line. powerfully written sorry for late commenting
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Wonderful little piece, thanks for the great entry. Hugs, Bunny
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'I wish to face this day
with pride and grace
but the gravity is pulling
all over the place'
nicely written
HENSLEY
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