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Better?

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Oh yes, to fly freely

and cuddle with me

giggling

Author notes

Picture: Winter Angel by Sandra Kuck

Somehow, the base that children start in life is the sense of simple truths, of prey and predator in loving repose.
Yes, we do mess it up for them as they see the smears,smudges and pain we inflict on each other. But once we start our final chapters, we somehow manage to become the inner child again, ah the miracle!

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When children rule the world, tis a better place, huh?

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  • DogFish silver member
    February 25, 2008
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    I don't thik a better poem for that picture could be writen!


  • malmadre gold member
    February 23, 2008

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    I also love to read your author's notes as well as your poetry. The innocence of children is too soon lost with every new exposure of the adults with their quirks.


  • poppa
    February 23, 2008

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    Well done Bj....this brought a smile to my face....Love the truth you have penned in your Authors notes.........good luck in the contest mate........peace