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Warmth of Children



in cradle
      of a childs arms

God’s creatures-
      are loved




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10 word poem
inspired by a picture

http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2392/579.jpg?1203773181

A contest entry

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  • Kelli Marie
    March 5, 2008

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    You make ten words sound like magic. Beautifully done. Congratulationjs on your silver trophy. Very nicely done.
    Kelli


  • Frozentearz
    February 26, 2008

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    ahhhh another soft and tender write and another award for you well done Mally well done.
    Love and Light
    Frozentearz


  • Elrenia
    February 24, 2008
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    A wonderful image. Congratulations on the placing.

    Thank you for sharing.

    rous


  • Namita
    February 23, 2008

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    I love this one! "cradle of children's arms" - so lovely! Cute and pretty painting, this one. Congrats on the silverness~

    - namita


  • Mirthryl
    February 23, 2008
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    Beautifully expressed. Love is natural to children. Congrats on the silver!


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 23, 2008

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    AWWWW Mally this is so nice, it fits right in with the picture, very nice 10 word poem, good luck in her contest, Moons

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