Its over
You're not here
But I don't care
You flew away in the wind
But I was looking the other way
I didn't care that you were gone
I knew you once
I dont know you and I dont care
I wont again
You disappeared like a shadow
And I never gave you a second look
Never will
You have no idea
What I've been through
I never loved you
Never will again
Stop looking for me
Because you won't find me
Everything you see
Is nothing
There is no such thing
As an ordinary day
So just move on
Get over it
Let it go!
Author notes
Song: Let it go by Melissa O'neill
Comments: I don't know where this came from... probably what Sam was and is thinking about me. but he's not so emotional... he's just plain mean.
...Comments?
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Good on ya darl.
I realy like this one, it expresses strong emotion.
Keep it up,
Keep on writing!
Love heaps!
Dani Dani
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Good sense of pain and hatred for this person. i liked the power you put in the words and how they made me feel. they reminded me of this one person i used to date and now...well let's just say i hope he dies a long and horrible death. Good poem. the best i have read yet today!!!
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again i say i know what this is like...it seems i can relate to a lot of what you write! this is a really good write, i kind felt that even though it was written from his perspective and what he thinks, it had your emotions all through it, which makes it very cool
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wow
longer than I thought it would be. but very nice.
Sounds like your yelling at the end. Hope you feel better soon
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When I read this poem I feel there are contradictions. The poem talks about not caring or loving yet it seems that you do care. It left me with mixed feelings.
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