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I Know That Song

I play it again
On the player

Then I play it myself
I don't want to sing it
I know all the words
But they remind me of you

The good times and the bad
The happy and the sad
Everything, every little thing
That we went through

6 months and it was all over
Friends to best friends
Boyfriend and girlfriend

Then you say you don't love me
It breaks my heart to think about it

But I hope you remember me
I hope you had the time of your life

Author notes

Song: Time Of Your Life
Comments: this is about my ex... just telling him, yeah i still think about you... but its over and i accept that. just remember me, coz you did once love me.

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  • After the Twilight
    May 6, 2008
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    Wow! Im sure this would relate to many people, but this is...wow! (Im stalking through Somebody-New..she made me read this and it is fantastic).

    this is a fantastic piece, well crafted, put together amazingly, and has great tempo.

    brilliant write!
    Kas


  • November-Dani
    April 3, 2008

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    Honey!
    This is great.
    I know its hard but we are gonna pull through together.

    Keep up the fantastic work,

    Dani


  • Somebody-New
    March 17, 2008

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    amazing

    first of all let me just say thanks heaps for commenting my poem!
    and secondly can i just say wow.... i have never been able to so closely relate to something as i can relate to this piece. it is an emotional, powerful, talented write that you should be so proud of!

    i cant exactly pick one line that i love because i love it all but this one;

    6 months and it was all over
    Friends to best friends
    Boyfriend and girlfriend

    Then you say you don't love me


    stands out the most to me as it is probably the one i can relate to the most because me and my ex went through the exact same story and i know how much it can break a persons heart, cos it broke mine.

    but yeah, i could go on and on but i wont, just want you to know i LOVE this so much, and i am definitely going to read more of your stuff because you have really captured my attention as a writer. great stuff!