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The Thief Of My Heart

I smile
Everytime you look at me
You can make me laugh
You comfort me when I cry

I am happy when I'm with you
But yet I'm not with you

You see, you have stolen my heart
But you have not given me yours
You are the thief of my heart

But I am yet to be the thief of yours

One day I will be
One day

Author notes

I was listening to The Thief by Brooke Fraser... I wrote this, reminising on past experiences and hoping for the future.

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  • Somebody-New
    March 20, 2008
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    oh yeah, this one sounds familiar eg- right now i like my best friend and he doesnt like me back!!
    but yeah, you have really shown the sense of unrequited romance here, but i like how you finished with a sense of hope, really rounds it off nicely and puts a positive spin on it, which makes me feel a lot better lol.
    great write!