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Lost,
In the knowledge
That there's one
Who can ease the pain
That haunts
This lifeless form
To become real

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Option 4: chosen one

I couldn't think of a title for this so any sugestions will be helpful, i think this also has a small part of option2 in it aswel. I hope you like

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  • Poco Loco
    February 24, 2008

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    Spooky and powerful at the same time. Brilliant wording to conjure powerful images. Good luck bro, xxx


  • sunflowerpoet
    February 23, 2008

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    Powerful writing. I loved the take on this prompt, I am yet to see many entries for this prompt. Nice wording. Thanks for entering...
    Hugz,
    Sunflower.