Lost,
In the knowledge
That there's one
Who can ease the pain
That haunts
This lifeless form
To become real
Author notes
Option 4: chosen one
I couldn't think of a title for this so any sugestions will be helpful, i think this also has a small part of option2 in it aswel. I hope you like
A contest entry
- Winner Takes All Quickie by sunflowerpoet.
300 points, ended February 24, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What you think?
Comments
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Spooky and powerful at the same time. Brilliant wording to conjure powerful images. Good luck bro, xxx


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Powerful writing. I loved the take on this prompt, I am yet to see many entries for this prompt. Nice wording. Thanks for entering...
Hugz,
Sunflower.

