Sun and pleasure lots of each
Fun for all is just in reach
Run to play down on the beach
It's summer
Planned to keep the crabs inside
Grand to watch the creatures ride
Sand cannot withstand the tide
In summer
Nice and cold when we are hot
Twice the price and want a lot
Ice creams though we all have got
For summer
Golden sand and ocean blue
Cold the water hot the view
Fold my arms around my you
Our summer...
Author notes
Just playing with rhyming
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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Let's get winter and spring out of the way and then we can all bask in the warm summer sun and enjoy the delights of 'Your Summer'.....
Love
Sue
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I love this! It's a fast flowing fun poem. The meter is on target and the image is delightful.
Love,
Amera♥
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MMMmmmmm I'm there on the beach with me lolly....you conjure up the scene so well - I can even hear the sea.
I like the pattern of this write....might give it a whirl meself....Hilly
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summer come now
Wonderful how this was full of the sea and the summer, warm ocean breezes and its stirring life and love...inspiring to write something of this hope of summer..
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I like it. Makes me wish it was summer right now.
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With a convenient beach and lovely partner available...
Ahhhhhh
Well, it cheers up a grey Saturday morning.
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