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the Twins

My twin sister and I are very close
As we’ve been  from the day we were born
We do everything together
Every day each night  every morn
We both wear the same clothes together
Its awkward to dress when in haste
That we cant wear different clothes matters little
As we both have  similar taste
When going out together
Both trying hard not to slip
It’s difficult keeping our balance
You see from birth we’ve been joined at the hip
We’re awaiting the big operation
We’re scared as you might well expect
It’s of quite a long duration
T’will be nice when we can both stand erect
Then after the long operation
When we mutually have our own parts
They might have achieved separation
But we’ll always be close in our hearts

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  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    May 15
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    This was awesome.
    My twins have a special connection too.
    They know when one is hurt and when one is away for too long. I find it very interesting how twins work. As mmine grow even know they become their own person they still have that very special bond between them. I really enjoyed this write.
    Thanks for sharing it.
    -Mandi

  • Going Forever
    December 6, 2008
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    Hello there. Good poe


  • My Souls Reflection gold member
    December 6, 2008

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    This was really touching. My twins certainly do have a very special connection too.

    Thank you for entering my contest.

    Annie


  • kathykool
    November 3, 2008
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    I love it! good job!!! Good luck in my contest. Are you really joined at the hip??


  • Brit-Girl
    July 24, 2008
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    sweet poem
    thanks for the entry


  • Ravensdark
    July 22, 2008

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    This is a really nice write. I like the subject and I think you have articulated it well. Tis a beautiful poem. Thanks for entering and good luck.


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    June 29, 2008

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    Wow i like this is very interesting and well written. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
    ..<3..
    Shelly


  • marciakay81
    May 24, 2008
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    interesting

    very nice write. thank you for the entry.

    • judmc
      May 25, 2008
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      marciakay81

      Many Thanks for your kind comments on "The Twins" glad you liked it Best Wishes George ++++

  • Vera Rich
    April 24, 2008

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    Thank you for entering - but Sorry... This entry is not eligible for the "Two sisters" competition, which specified a PAIR of complementary poems in identical form submitted together.

    However, you can still earn points in this competition if - once the results are announced (but not before!), and not later than 1 May, you comment on other people's entries. To earn points in this way, comments should be at least 30 words long (your own words - quotes from the poem do not count), have something meaningful to say, and say it in standard English!

    The results should be ready not later than 11.00am British Summer Time today (24 April)


  • jcat gold member
    April 22, 2008

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    This was great!!! I am sure that many twins can relate to this wether conjoined or not.. Very well done and best of luck here

  • ichigosama
    April 13, 2008

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    ichigosama

    awwww!!!! that's so sweet. i'm not a twin but me and my brother have a bond just like that. but we'll always be close in our hearts. very nice and thanks for entering.

    • judmc
      April 14, 2008
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      itchigosama

      many thanks for your kind comments on "The Twins"very much appreciated.Best wishes to you and your brother
      George


  • beisekergirl
    March 24, 2008

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    This is a beautiful testiment, well done, thank you so much for sharing, i do really like it, excellent imagry, description and wording, bravo!


  • forgotten hopes
    February 26, 2008
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    Wow this is so interesting i really enjoyed reading it. what a lovely thought of closeness

  • davidwright silver member
    February 23, 2008

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    That's very endearing George and an excellent write. Your work is outstanding and I presume you've been writing for a while. Good days are a comn' brother stay well. David

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