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Ignorance Is Bliss






I thrived,
ignorant of past deeds,
yet not understanding
attitudes.

You confessed;
now I dispair
of ever trusting you again.



©2008
2-12-08



Author notes

Written for the contest: Winner Takes All Quickie by Sunflowerbeauty
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2392575

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  • sunflowerpoet
    February 23, 2008

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    I loved this piece, especially the ending which is really catchy. Very well written. Thanks for entering..
    Hugz,
    Sunflower.


  • takemypainaway
    February 23, 2008

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    your words are strong

    you have a wonderfull peice here

    best of luck in the contest


    --kat