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Pre-owned lover


Splintered messes of bleeding heart
bestowed, upon my soothing arms;

Smiling, I wash yesterday's stains.

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15 words, propmt: Secondhand

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  • takemypainaway
    February 23, 2008

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    ouch... being left to clean up your own vroken heart

    can be sad

    you have a nice clean write here

    best of luck in the contest


    --kat