Imagine dreams of vivid strength
Exist because they're true.
Knowing that, to us, they're false
The truth is over-due.
Then as the world of truth is built,
Ignoring history,
We realise that we are real
So nothing else can be.
Remember days when all felt right
Where nothing summoned doubt,
Ignorance was never bliss
When truth was shaded out.
Forgetting all the things we've learnt
About what's real and fake,
Tell this to me about your truth;
Was dreaming a mistake?
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Wow this is amazing! the rhyme is syllabically (if thats how you say it...!) perfect
And the idea is really good
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wow
that is amazing to the 9th power.you are definetly one of the best writers on here.great job :]keep writing
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You are kind =]
Even I like some of my work, but some of it is awful! Thanks for a lovely comment =]
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I love it. but you do have a typo...learnt unless you want it that way and if you do it works.
Kelsi
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WOW!!!!!!
This is so amazing... and even though I'm sure its rhetorical... I don't think dreaming is a mistake!...I don't know what else to say...
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Fxcking excellent!
Your rhyme and flow is spot on - and this ending is just terrific! Way to punch a person in their face!
You should really be proud of your writes - a very few people can rhyme and make it good, like yourself.
Never ♥
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Soooooooo good........!!!!!
Wow...this is really good. You made me think here about my own dreams and reality...
I don't think dreaming was a mistake but it was my mistake to believe dreams became reality...although many people say they can...untill now I didn't had any becoming that way...
To stay with two feet on the ground is sometimes hard...mostly it's my emotions ruling my life...
And I am really trying to change that sometimes but it's soooooooo hard when you're a dreamer
Geez
Do you see what comes up in my mind with this poem of yours???
Damn...I really liked this
Thnxs for making me read and think over this
XXJeannette
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