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Governors

Fleet of cars
Flight of thoughts
not unusual
on high ways

Inclement weather
Innocent road
both thrill
but kill  'warmth'

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  • takemypainaway
    February 23, 2008
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    very deep

    your words are sharp

    best of luck in the contest


    --kat


  • sunflowerpoet
    February 23, 2008

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    Aww that was an interesting and unexpected take on the prompt indeed! I loved the idea and the way you have captured the image with your words. The title was original too. Well done, and thanks for entering!
    Hugz,
    Sunflower.