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Missing image
I'm yesterday's girl
painted like a China Doll

you can play with me
long enough to know

I'm not real...

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Prompt ~ Mistaken Identity

A contest entry

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  • marlene47 silver member
    February 23, 2008

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    I've had this feeling too - about 40 years ago, when I was transparent and used to fall in love.
    Marlene


  • takemypainaway
    February 23, 2008

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    aww harsh feelings

    metaphoricly being not being real is bad but when you

    know it your self then its worse

    great poem you have here

    best of luck in the contest


    --kat


  • sunflowerpoet
    February 23, 2008

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    Excellence in simple words! Absolutely brilliant take on the prompt, with a masterful ending. Loved it! Thanks for entering...
    Hugz,
    Sunflower.