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Poets Dream



Word falls from pen
Soothing hearts
Desolated by society.

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  • maa gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    only for boddhisattva-poets
    now I know your sacred mission, bhaiji, no need to hide it ...


    marion


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    February 24, 2008

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    This is such a lovely write. I love the imagery of words falling from the pen. You have really done well here, well done.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 23, 2008

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    very nice! you expressed what was needed in this to say what is in your heart, thanks for sharing, Moons


  • Providence
    February 23, 2008

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    Evocative…softly reminding us of our place in the world and the damage we have created there.


    Nicely done.

    Marianne


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    February 23, 2008

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    Another brilliant peice of writing my brother.
    I adore your talent with words/poetry


    CIndy


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 23, 2008
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    Truly creative... x

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