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tea time with mina nagi







three cups tea
in water closet
interrupted silence






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  • Mallig gold member
    March 8, 2008

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  • Namita
    March 1, 2008

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    OMG. LOL, This is perfect! Maybe all poetic and poetic-ish and wannabe poetic people drinks lotsa tea.

    I drink about 8-9 cups a day. I know, mom tells me I'm too young to drink that much!

    - namita


  • maa gold member
    February 24, 2008

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    wow, this haiku DEFINITELY has an "aha-moment" !!!
    just perfect !
    (gotta run, drank 4 cups of tea already this morning ...)


    maa


  • SeptemberFaith
    February 23, 2008
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  • macandrew
    February 23, 2008

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    Very funny.

    John


  • Yemassee gold member
    February 23, 2008

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    That is just plain nasty, nothing else I can say about it!

    Peeku, a new genre here on AllPoetry...which makes it one of the higher art forms here btw...

    How about an emopeeku

    three cups coffee--
    I pee my soul out
    in black streams

    early for me, what do you expect?


    • maa gold member
      February 24, 2008
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      peeku ?

      a great idea for a contest, what do you think ?


      maa


    • Mari Goes gold member
      February 23, 2008
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      Doesn't too much moxie cause the same colour effect? lol


  • leander Moderators member
    February 23, 2008
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  • mina nagi gold member
    February 23, 2008

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    It's amazing what comes out in a quiter environment... I meant "thought" don't spill it

    mina

    • Mari Goes gold member
      February 23, 2008
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      You are the voice in my head this morning lol
      I look at the tea bags and feel like drinking more, but am tired of walking every 5 minutes lol


      • mina nagi gold member
        February 23, 2008
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        Mari, Thanx for the giggles


        • Mari Goes gold member
          February 23, 2008
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          Thank you! An unexpected day off and with laughter to start it! Couldn't be better

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