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Yume (Dream)

Transgress limits
Forbid terrain
Fight realms
And pontificate the ideals

Author notes

I didn't understand if "A poet's dream" was about their dreaming while sleeping or about their dreams as goals. I took it from the second option.

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  • Blooming Poet
    March 6, 2008

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    A little overpowering. May I ask what pontificate means, I have never heard of it. Just curious. Love the first line Transgress limits


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 23, 2008
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    Very imaginative... x


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 23, 2008

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    Well expressed. Great word use and strong imagery


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