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The Last Poets Dedication

Dedicated to the last poets

The Last no more...

We're Underated, We're Educated

The Corner was our time when Times stood still

And Gators and snake gangs and yellow and pink

and colored blue profiles glorify that

My People, Hear what I have to say

My People, Ebony, white, red, Yellow the times have changed

No longer are niggers afraid of Revolution

No longer are niggers afraid of Solution

We no longer accept it

The Dollar Bill is the Nigga's only god

We've been spoiled rotten to the core, even those whose parents didnt "spare the
Rod"

But There will be a Revolution

Oh believe we'll find a Solution

And when the Revolution comes, some of us will catch it on TV

at least those wit enough sense to stop watchin 106 & Park on BET

And While This is goin on

We must always remember the corner as our home

The Corner was Our Magic, Our Music, Our Politics

Fires Raised as Tribal Dancers and

War cries that broke out on different corners

Power to the people, Black Power, Black Is Beautiful

We Raised the alarm, but no one heeded the call

Niggas so used to runnin away or tryin to stall

We're still stuck in the slave days

Still followin the Willie Lynch Ways

"Keep the Slave's Body Strong and It's Mind Weak"

We play football out on concrete

and Watch TV everyday of the week

See the Connection?

The Last poets Prophosized a Revolution

and Prayed that the youth would find a solution

Listen, Listen! Do you hear the War Drums?

Listen, Listen! Out Of many we make one

E PLURIBUS UNUM

We make one by mentally destroyin many

Niggers so oblivious to the obvious as long as the world keeps spinning

O' Holy One Heard my cry

And Saw the tears in my eyes as more people set out to die

Today is the day for Revolution

Today is the start of our search for solutions

On this Day, we are now all free

On this night, We'll Put our mark down in history

My people, My People, the Revolution has come

My People, My people, Do you hear the War Drums?

My people, My People,Out of many concerns our voice becomes one

This isnt the Start of another Dream

This Must Be the Start Of Reality

And We watch As the Niggas turn into Mourners

No longer able to find anyone to hustle on the corner

And I finally Have found a sense of Self Worth

As I lay these Roses on Spoken Words Place of Birth

The Corner was Our Rock of Gibraltar, Our Stone Henge

Our Taj Mahal, Our Monument

Our Testimonial to Freedom, To Peace, And To Love

Down On the Corner...

This Is dedicated to the Last Poets

The Revolution Has Begun

Author notes

This POem uses and pays tribute to the Last Poets lines from poems include "the Corner", "My People", "when The Revolution Comes", and "Niggers are afraid of Revolution"

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  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    December 6, 2008

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    You have a really strong start here and overall it's a good write. Amazed that it came from someone so young
    I love the unity that it expresses, great inclusive language.


  • LadyUnique silver member
    March 6, 2008

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    i can almost hear this as a song. i think it would be pretty powerful that way very strong poem
    thanks for entering and good luck


  • e m i l y
    February 26, 2008

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    Oh hm. I liked it, it
    was powerful but the use
    of the word nigger strikes
    me as rude.

    It was a good poem anyways,
    and I wish you the best of luck.


  • Perception
    February 25, 2008

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    Powerful, powerful write you have here. Wonderful... Power just ooozes from every word you have penned... This is something... you are passionate about... something you really believe in... Something you stand up for...

    ~ Wonderful

    (I do suggest that you don't capitalize random words... It looks funny )


  • sharkofdhoom
    February 24, 2008
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    beautiful and amazing, and very strong. I love it. Thanks for sharing something so beautiful.


  • cafegroundzero gold member
    February 23, 2008

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    Hear, hear! Chicago gives applause, yah way to go, baby


    This is very good, and flows, and has soul and deeper thought and just an all round splendid tribute to the sisters and brothers, to the mothers, fathers, uncles, aunts, grand parents and all the elders and saints who have done worked hard, prayed long, wished and sweated out long nights blood sweat & tears to soothe and overcome the fears of the night, the toils of the day, the wonders of this suffering land and blood drenched soil.

    I thank ya, & wanna thank ya more from my heart, from my soul, a thanks of silver, a praise of gold. I would like to say keep going, stay strong, be blessed and live so they impressed.


  • just mercedes gold member
    February 23, 2008

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    I like this, strong and proud. It would have been a great entry in my contest "Black History, Black Pride".


  • Elena95
    February 23, 2008

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    i like it.
    you have a lot of strong points in here.
    i love the end
    "The Revolution Has Begun"
    nice x

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