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A contest entry
- A day in the life of... (Diary Excerpt) Contest by galfalfa.
525 points, ended March 2, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congrats on the HM!
Superb insight, very creative and amusingly written. I love the way he drugged him in the end...fantastic
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Well just when I think you couldn't top your booger self you go and doubly impress me... twice the fun
... twice the laughter..twice the claps is what you
get from me!!!!!!
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LOL, actually in reality they shared one wife and had lots of children - she had herself a man sandwich, in between two men
Sadly one died before the other...
Gosh i had to giggle and i know it extremely wicked but when one dies before the other, does the alive one drag the deceased around?
But no, the death of one slowly poisoned the other..sad eh? Had my example been longer i would have elaborated on that scenerio
Perfectly executed and so creative...all but a tiny typo on the left side of the book page, "be" should be "bet"...
This didnt give me a splitting headache like my example gave you
Its actually doubled the pleasure and laughs 
thanks for the giggles, loved this!
galfalfa
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thanks for noticing the typo, that's a characteristic one for me. I think my fingers were out of breath...
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