To be remembered years hence,
with a tear of adoration.
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10 words
A contest entry
- A poet's dream by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended February 23, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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beautiful
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short and to the point.
I am into more quieter poetry at the moment.things that don't so much bring back yesterdays memories.
just trying to enjoy the sun, the moon, the day, the night...life in a whole, without the rush and pull...
thank you again.
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I think we should all like to be remembered with such emotion! Says so much... well deserved trophy my friend!
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Congrats on your silver, and your amazing and true penning, love always Josie
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Just stunning... x
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So true and a great thought for this
contest prompt! Good luck to you
with it here and thanks a lot for
sharing it!
Jeremy0826 -
Preciously said; a smile came to me so easily reading this
♥
Best of luck in the contest
Stay safe
~Manda
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beautiful & true
blessed be -
This is nice work, I think alot poets,writers and artist in general feel this way about their work. excellent work here.
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You slipped another one in before I left
I promise I will always remember you with adoration and so much more. The tears will always be a reminder of times shared as well.
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