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Torn

Suicide lingers,
on us as we f a d e..
Change is so hard -
I reach for the blade..
So tempted so willing,
Why do this to me?
Slitting, blood spitting -
We had everything!
We - before your "best friend" came along..
Psycho bitch Barbie stalks among -
dividing us so you can choose him -
head for the military -
cutting deeper into limbs,
throwing parts of me in bins of solitary..
Wanting your kids -
Aren't we supposed to get married?
Lies blanket over my sinful bids..
Slice through the tears,
yank out my heart,
speed through the years..
You t o r e me a p a r t

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  • Lady Australis silver member
    February 23, 2008

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    oh wow deep
    i like this one
    i hope your not hurting n if you do it gets better
    well done
    n blessed be