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Vampire's Song

I’ve been walking through the darkness,
And I feel so alive.
Though, I’ve been walking through the darkness,
I feel the light.

I’ve been hunting for my victims,
And I am ready to dine.
Yes I’ve been hunting for my victims,
I’ll take whatever I can find.

The light is coming back now,
I fear that I will burn.
Though, the light is coming back now,
I shall return.

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I suppose a vampire would sing this while lurking around in the night.

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  • zarlahgirl
    October 22, 2008

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    Very Cool!

    I love this! It definately is a 'lurking' song! lol Well done and I cant wait to read more from you!