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Windows to my Soul

My windows--they are not bright or clear
It takes time to decipher what is written here

These eyes of mine have much to hide
A battle going on, deep inside

The things I should and shouldn't do
Wage war within my soul
Until control I give to You
I never will be whole

Light and dark struggle at will
As your commands I try to fulfill

These eyes of mine have much to hide
A battle going on, deep inside

A contest entry

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    March 3, 2008

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    I think we all have battles going on deep inside. This is a good take on the prompt, I like it. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm


  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    February 24, 2008

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    we all have hidden battles but once conquered, we are better persons, Battles help us grow if we learn from them