Scattered

Brooding sky
one last sigh
I let my spirit soar
before the roar
bears down...

scattering me
like lonely leaves.

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20 word quickie:
graphic credit: Insanity by EbruSidar at www.deviantart.com

A contest entry

10 POETS. 20 WORDS. 15 MINUTES by Erika Elektrikka. 475 points, ended February 22, 2008, 5 entries
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natchstucco
February 23, 2008

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very well worded gold medal winner. again you are by far the best in th crowd. congratulations. scattered is one word for what is going to happen.

Erika Elektrikka
February 22, 2008

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I am blown away by this piece. Great imagery.

Good Luck,
Erika

jcat
February 22, 2008

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YIKES!!! Disturbing imagery brilliantly written!! Well done and best of luck but this gets my vote for the gold!

Kari
February 22, 2008

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I like how you talk about your spirit soaring in this piece, I could almost see it..
Very well done and I wish you the best of luck in the contest

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