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To You I Surrender

To forget all fears
lost in depths of
manufactured depression
cured only by
one true heart [trust]

Memories of words spoken
linger thoughtfully
through dreams of
once upon a time and toys
made happiness [unreal]

You saved me [revealed]
& to that I owe my heart,
my body, my soul [my being]
and to you on this day
-I give you
      exactly as promised
just that-

Author notes

Ryan... you've helped me through a lot... through my depression you never did anything but make me smile... now you still make me smile... miles come between us... but you have a piece of my heart! Happy birthday!

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  • Ryno
    February 23, 2008

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    Awwwwwwwwwwwww Your gonna make me cry.... Thats so nice just to hear that I've helped you that much... you have no idea how much that means to me...

    What a nice poem Meg!!!!

    Thank you so so Much!!!!


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    February 23, 2008

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    Beautiful

    your AP B/f Sweets is now my Little Bro as I just felt it was a nice title for him to have plus I wanted a little bro but any ways with that being said in a weirdish way sorry if that scared ya =-P I really love your poem here. its very deep and extremely beautiful too. its beautiful because it came from your big heart and its for a good cause ad it is also worded purrrrrrfectly as I really enjoyed your style within this poem. any ways nice work and keep it up Daddy