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Swinging Simple

Walk with me, love
Under blue-fielded dreams
And soft, palpable cotton balls
Hung thick to roam above us
                                                  Where cares are no more worries
                                                  Than the sun is to the sky
                                                  And love can last forever
                                                  Holding hands that never die
You can push me on this tire swing
And twirl me in exuberance
Catch me should I tumble
And laugh with me as we fall to the soft grass
                                                  As the sky falls to indigo curtains
                                                  And diamonds pierce above
                                                  Forever burning for all to see
                                                  Symbolism for our love
Ah, Life was simpler then
When all of this was not so distant
When we didn't have to dream
For a vintage Sunday to occur
                                                  And ours will last forever
                                                  Though times have changed from start to start
                                                  We'll swing on simple tires
                                                  And commit each diamond to our hearts

                                                                                        It's possible with you

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  • creationsfromheart
    May 8, 2008
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    I like the words but not crazy about the stanza formtion...