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Big Game

My heart is torn, I cant break lose. Locked in your trap made for fools like me. Designed to bleed me of my faith in others. Designed to drain my pockets through the deception of your smiles. My arteries blocked from lies spread by you. My body systems crumbling under your grasp. There was a time when your embrace was enough to bring the sun around another day. Now the thought of you makes my teeth clench, my back spasm, and what left of my heart ache. You are the ultimate hunter. You just caught your big game. Congratulation my love.

Can you sense the feeling I was trying to portray?

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  • brittcabob
    May 7, 2008
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    this is amazing.
    =)