Rolling thunder and sparks to soar;
a deluge of love and so much more.
When out of the sky, the lightning cracks;
a bolt to bring what your heart lacks.
And rains pour down, soothing the soul;
replacing again, what fate has stole.
To cast, within the raging eye;
a vortex to shelter, a place to hide.
Lose yourself within your sleep;
captured in the dreams to keep.
And as before you, the cloud now forms;
a vision of the Goddess of Storms.
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Hood-Winked!
Wow what amazing imagery and emotion within your beautiful poem. I love the background too. Goes so well with your write. You are such an amazing writer never put down your pen! Have a blessed day
Theresa
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You have been Hood Winked by the Poetic Bandits. This is your day in the spotlight - enjoy. Loved the presentation of this page - the background, color, sidebar of lightning strikes, and poem itself - they all fit together so nicely. Great rhythm, rhyme and flow in your lines. Keep writing...
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Thank you for your comments, much appreciated.
Storm
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Hood-Winked!
A very good write and presentation. Good imagery, flow, rhyme and tone. Vivid descriptives. Very nice depth of feeling. Good word choice, alliteration and nice assonance. Very nice closing verse. Well penned and much enjoyed.
You have just been hoodwinked by a member of The Poetic Bandits. Have a wonderful day.
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Thank you for the comments, much appreciate it.
Storm
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HOOD WINKED!! Smiling here...
WOW WOW WOW!!! This poem sends a bolt of lightning and then wraps the reader up in a fine velvet cape. Beautiful writing, most surely! 
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Thank you hun, appreciate your comments immensely.
Storm
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Hoodwinked!
This is such a wonderful poem, I am amazed that this has no reviews on it... but it certainly will by the end of the day am sure as you are about to be ambushed dear by the Poetic Bandits.
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Thank you so much. Appreciate it.
Storm
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