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Yesterday's queen;
discarded.
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Author notes
Once children grow they often lose their appeal to parents....sadly
In a list
A contest entry
- three words to impress me by adsaige.
300 points, ended March 20, 2008, 34 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow this is really short and sweet, and you won bronze, wow like I said wow. It was a pleasure.
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Love it! great metaphor and device.
so much impact and imagery in three little words!
That was truly inspiring!
well done poetess, well done!
ears2hearyou
Kathleen : ))
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Wow what a brilliant three words hun, you captured this so well in just three... goodluck in the contest
Karen
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Certainly a challenge--three words but your words are certainly impressive! What I like best is there is many different directions to go with them. Good luck in the contest!
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I agree
it seems as though they no longer feel the need to love
but rather push them away or overly control their life
which can be frusterating
great word choise
Best of luck in the contest
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It's sad that this is true. I loved your word choice. Very original, very personal, very touching. Awesome write! ^.^
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ooooooooo I totally love this one here! I think every girl can relate to this one in a personal way very well done
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i dont know why. it just spoken to me in a way....probably thanks to a poem my friend wrote earlier. this means alot to me with the reference to a queen. it's definitely one of the most unique pieces i've received in this contets.
welcome to the finalist list. thank you for entering and good luck.
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