Carbon
raining
sunrays
Our relationship is photosynthesis
& even in this drought
I only water on Sundays
A contest entry
- Overnight Quickie - [Prompt up] by Never Fall in Love.
300 points, ended February 24, 2008, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Celticmoon's and Leander's glue a trophy on my Prewrite by leander.
800 points, ended March 27, 2008, 74 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Shoot.
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Excellent...everything about this.
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Thank-you
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The title drew me in immediately. There's not one thing I could say about this, besided the fact that I'm putting this onto preliminary list
Well done!
Leander -
This is absolutely brilliant. I can see how you won with this one . It is gripping to say the least and that closing line freakin rocks!
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The simple complexity of this piece doesn't surprise me coming from you. It's simple and still runs deep into the mind. I love how you leave me to think Ryan.
Thank you for entering.
Best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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Funny poem, and yet so true.
A condensed recipe to love even if it's hard.
Allura
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this is beautiful.
i was drawn in by the name.
and the poem did insane justice.
i am amazed and bewildered.
practically flabbergasted.
take the gold - it's yours.
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Quit amazing...the thought in those words is extremely captivating.
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Thank-you !
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Very Nice
Lmao my dear sweet AP lil bro my mother would kill you LOL! she loves daffodil's and hell even my Canadian girlfriend would kill ya because she loves daffodils as well but I really like the way this poem was penned and also really love the depth and unique word play through out this poem of yours. any ways just an incredible well penned poem that has alot of imagery through out it. keep up the good work Good Luck with the contest
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Oh damn... this is really really really good! I swear I wish I could write like you Ryan! amazazing! xoxo Meg
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