Have you ever noticed
How ironic life is?
Exercising gives you energy,
Yet doing nothing sucks it away.
You'd think it'd be the other way around.
Have you ever noticed
How ironic life is?
You get more done
When you have less time,
Yet when you have all the time in the world
You get nothing done.
Have you ever noticed
How ironic life is?
You try to prolong life,
Eat well and exercise,
Just to die anyway.
Have you ever noticed
How ironic life is?
Everything revolves around money,
How to make more
And get it from everyone else
Instead of just sharing the wealth.
Have you ever noticed
How ironic life is?
Author notes
There, I wrote a poem Amber
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow this poem is so true and yet, so original! Many people wouldnt have thought of writing it!! I like everything about it! Amazing work!! Keep it up!!! and Keep on writing!!
bravo *clap*
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"Have you ever noticed
How ironic life is?
You get more done
When you have less time,
Yet when you have all the time in the world
You get nothing done."
^^^^^^this is prolly the most true part. but the whole this was fantasimically wonderful. uber fantastic. and honest. i like it.
<3julia
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I'm glad you wrote a poem too.
And especially this one.
I really love it.
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omgosh! so true!
love the poem!
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