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Cries To The Moon

Such soothing serenity,
From the cold blaze,
Of the midnight sun.

Her wings spread valiantly,
Across the skies,
As the light of the Celtic moon.

I can hear,
The wolves cry out,
In midnight hour.

This call of home,
In her light,
It’s what I’ve known.

I join the wolves’ cry,
For the Celtic moon.

Here’s to another year.

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For you, Bel.

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  • Moons Lunar Angel
    March 21, 2008

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    Ow Kyle! What a peice you have penned for mum. This is her through and through. I know this has touched her deeply and I also 'howl' with you in salute to this amazing person.
    Thankyou so much for joining this celebration and bringing warmth to mum's heart.
    Goodluck!
    Lil


  • catz Moderators member
    March 20, 2008

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    this a wonderful poem for Bel Your words point directly at our special lady. I can see that she loves this piece

    Good luck in the contest
    Dee


  • poetryality silver member
    March 17, 2008

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    "This call of home,
    In her light,
    It’s what I’ve known."

    I love these lines. They make me know that you know Bel! I howl with you in salute to her being blessed with another year. An excellent entry, and heartfelt tribute. Thank you for this entry and I wish you the best.



    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • Celticmoon
    February 29, 2008

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    Kyle,

    I was actually trying to avoid reading the entries in this contest as I knew where I would end up while at the same time I knew I wouldn't get away with it still.

    As for your words here,
    What can I say but thank you...
    I simply have no words to offer here in graditude.
    I humbly thank you hun,
    I truly am touched.



    Blessings
    Bel



  • Nikki Rowles
    February 25, 2008

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    Different, I really like the celtic moon reference line 6 not what I would have expected from you, but still very good...much shorter than the last one I read...107 lines or something like that, for me this could be religious, but that's just me...but it's beautiful, and very nature realited...I have no clue who bel is it would be weird if I did, but she seems to be luck...cause from what I can tell you seem to care about her, and any one who can write like you is bound to be one emotional person (in a good way)....kudos to you...I don't see how you have no comments on this one yet...weird...


    • Karsis
      February 25, 2008

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      I have my moments...
      Also, this is not religious,
      For me.
      I suppose if you knew who Bel is,
      You'd know why it looks that way.
      It's more just symbolic.
      Anyway, thank you.

      -Saint.

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