Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

The Secret Garden

Shimmering vines
hide the secrets
of the answer
to the question
of the garden.

Op'lescent nails
search for the cracks
with the answer
to the question
of the garden.

Shining gold key
unlocks the door
to the answer
to the question
of the garden.

A little girl
Enters the place
of the answer
to the question
of the garden.

(She finds what she was looking for)

Author notes

Based on the musical "The Secret Garden" which I'm planning to direct next year (here's hoping I get my show voted in)!

Please give a critical critique

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Ja Vorbesc
    February 22, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Beautiful poem! Hope you get your show voted in.

    I think you misspelled the title accidentally...you might check on that.

    • BloodtippedWings
      February 22, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      Oh my gosh, I totally did! Thanks for pointing that out!

      And thanks for the hope