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Winter Rose { HM }

Missing image

Single set a rose, 

In bud, 

Facet cut among crystal ,

Garnet folds of velvet ,

Perfume scents enrobed,

In waiting,

To unfurl.

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

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3. NATURE

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  • cindy4
    September 11, 2008
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    exquistely beautiful


  • daviscth silver member
    July 3, 2008
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    I really, really like this short poem. Your words go so well with this amazing picture. Thanks for posting this.

  • imahealer
    March 1, 2008

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    You have my full attention with this special poem. I'll tell you why. First, because it is great! Second, because when one of my sons was diagnosed with a bad disease, I planted a red rose bush. IT never gets any diseases, and it blooms through December.Planted in 1994, It grows bigger each year. Thank you for the reminder, and sharing your wonderful work. Picture is amazing!

    Shana


  • daviscth silver member
    February 24, 2008

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    A beautiful picture with the words to make it blossom into full bloom. Great job sis!!! Good luck in the contest.


  • jcat gold member
    February 24, 2008

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    This was very lovely and actually had a sensual feeling to it as well!!! I am in awe!!! Wonderfully done and best of luck in the contest dear.....


  • Chrissy03
    February 23, 2008
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    lovely

    Very good short poem.


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    February 23, 2008

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    That is beautiful my sister. That is a really beautiful piece of writing. So short yet breathtaking.

    Love
    Wayne Leon
    xxx


  • storiesuntold gold member
    February 23, 2008
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    Beautiful it is

    Oh excellent write indeed here


  • Mallig gold member
    February 22, 2008

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    Very lovely concept and words. Wonderful, rich imagery. Especially liked "Garnet folds of velvet ,
    Perfume scents enrobed,
    In waiting,
    To unfurl."


  • Candy6
    February 22, 2008
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    very beautiful

    Great job writing and expressing how the rose is beautiful.

  • Bob Fox
    February 22, 2008
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    The rose

    Infinite beauty and the fragrance of love. A smile that increases with each bud


  • Angelic Princess21
    February 22, 2008

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    very nice write hun i like this best of luck in the contest.
    Love You

    Angel


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    February 22, 2008

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    Another one

    You have such a great command of the English language and your verbage id awesome--great take on the prompt and good luck!!


  • Erika Elektrikka
    February 22, 2008

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    This is absolutely beautiful! I am in love with this poem. So beautiful are your words.

    Good Luck,
    Erika


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      March 12, 2008
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      Thank you for my HM
      Must say this is one of my favorite short poem I have written.
      Julie xx

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