Single set a rose,
In bud,
Facet cut among crystal ,
Garnet folds of velvet ,
Perfume scents enrobed,
In waiting,
To unfurl.
Author notes
3. NATURE
A contest entry
- _.:*~*:._.:*~*OPTIONS: BIG POINTS*~*:._.:*~*:._ by Erika Elektrikka.
2200 points, ended March 12, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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exquistely beautiful
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I really, really like this short poem. Your words go so well with this amazing picture. Thanks for posting this.
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You have my full attention with this special poem. I'll tell you why. First, because it is great! Second, because when one of my sons was diagnosed with a bad disease, I planted a red rose bush. IT never gets any diseases, and it blooms through December.Planted in 1994, It grows bigger each year. Thank you for the reminder, and sharing your wonderful work. Picture is amazing!
Shana
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A beautiful picture with the words to make it blossom into full bloom. Great job sis!!! Good luck in the contest.
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This was very lovely and actually had a sensual feeling to it as well!!! I am in awe!!! Wonderfully done and best of luck in the contest dear.....
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lovely
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That is beautiful my sister. That is a really beautiful piece of writing. So short yet breathtaking.
Love
Wayne Leon
xxx
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Beautiful it is
Oh excellent write indeed here
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Very lovely concept and words. Wonderful, rich imagery. Especially liked "Garnet folds of velvet ,
Perfume scents enrobed,
In waiting,
To unfurl."
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very beautiful
Great job writing and expressing how the rose is beautiful.
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The rose
Infinite beauty and the fragrance of love. A smile that increases with each bud
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very nice write hun i like this best of luck in the contest.
Love You
Angel
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Another one
You have such a great command of the English language and your verbage id awesome--great take on the prompt and good luck!!
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This is absolutely beautiful! I am in love with this poem. So beautiful are your words.
Good Luck,
Erika
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Thank you for my HM
Must say this is one of my favorite short poem I have written.
Julie xx
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