No barrier can come between us
A triangle of new life
has spawned from our affection
As Father time pushes forward
and the past crumbles to dust
our love shakes the world
Sweetheart this bodily appetite is
almost to the point of gluttony
unable to be satisfied
Oh my sweet husband
your presence fills my mind with
fleshly lust
You consume my soul
my heart burns with love
I overindulge in you;
The friendship between us
is more durable than the thickest block of steel
Our love destined to last for all eternity
My dear
you fill my dreams
day in and day out
God put us together
and what he puts together shall no one take apart...
Darling I could sit here and muse on and on...
pulling out the most deepest recesses of my soul
Sweet darling
my best friend
Dearest husband I love you!
A contest entry
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300 points, ended March 8, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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this was sweet and really good! well worded and put together! great work!
good luck with the contest
keep it up!
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This is so beautiful! I love it! It is well spoken and worded, Great job! Good luck in the contest!
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There is a song that was made almost for you
"This girl is in love with you" i see it in all you say and the way you write with love Lucky girl and very lucky guy...once in a life time deals and to so few of us are truely bless this way...mac
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that's sweet. Nice job. There's definitly affection in it. Thanks for entering.
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Aww.
Lucky husband to have a wife with such strong feelings towards him. Looks like you guys have a loving indestructible bond.
Nicely written, and good luck!
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sweet
and so full of obvious affection. I'm guessing this is probably gonna score major points w hubby! maybe now will be a good time to hit him up for a new car! l.o.l. j.k. anyway great write.
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Cool!
Very nice write, felt like a reading through a flow of emotions. easy to read, vivid in images, and heartfelt.
nicely done, i'll be cheking out other things by you... :-)
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