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Flowing Hatred

The cuts of disappoint line my arms

Each hideous wound

Bubbles with crimson hatred

That overflows into a ruby river

Slithering its way down my wrist

Peaking into droplets of self hatred

Dripping off my fingertips




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  • Erika Elektrikka
    February 22, 2008

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    Wow, what emotions!!!! This is so sad, but completely amazing.

    "Bubbles with crimson hatred

    That overflows into a ruby river"

    ^^ My fave lines.

    Good Luck,
    Erika